gebruiken? of eerder begrijpen wat dit inhoudt voor je blik naar de wereld, hoe je overkomt en wat je daarmee wil gaan doen
this first page is much improved, the tone, the point of departure, the level of analysis combined with observation, well done elke
again impressive work here as you can see as i have nothing to say in this whole page; compare this with the first draft!
this is a great and funny and to the point comment, Stuart Hall would be proud of you!
here i would disagree and say that they have the opportunity to negotiate and think through the system they find themselves in. Acknowledgement is already an improvement over disavowal as it will allow you to see more and then you get to choose what you do with the seeing.
what can I say; i am so impressed with the changes you have made to this essay. It is a joy to read, well argued, well written, engaging, urgent, theoretically grounded.
you are good to go; just a bit of tidying up here and there.
Elke’s work in the magazine is mainly focussed to awareness of our own privilege in our daily life. She tried to understand what her position in society is and how she could use that position. This is the question she wants the readers to ask themselves. And then, to take their position, their privilege, and use it for creating something good. To do that she give examples of including brands like Bonne Suit and showed how to be an ally. But she also gives tips to look at things that cross by every day, like art, social media and podcasts with a meaningful message.